Ok, the English teacher in me has just broken free

! Seriously, though, I agree with previous posters that your letter needs to be more articulate and succinct in order to be noticed. Many of the corrections I am suggesting are very minor, but when taken as a whole, I think they improve the "better grammer indicates higher intelligence" thing (which we know is not true anyway!). Please do not take offense at my corrections; I assume you posted it for that reason. Also, "proper English" usually extends contractions (don't = do not) and puts the commas inside quotation marks, such as "Come Monday," "One Particular Harbour," etc. I believe the song titles go in quotes and the album names get italicized if you can. I realize this is e-mail and not your Master's thesis, but every little bit helps when getting your letter noticed. Good luck!!!!!!!!
The reason for me sending this e-mail is to shed light on an issue that I find very important.
Change to Margarita Will's version
Back in the 80’s when...
Previously in the 1980's, when CD’s were...
The CD issues that were re-issues of albums originally pressed on vinyl to my understanding,
vinyl, to (insert comma)
no liner notes, no band credits, no lyrics, nothing.
no liner notes, no band credits, and no lyrics.
For most artist’s catalogues,
artists' (artists plural possessive)
Many popular songs are included on those albums, “Come Monday” , “Margaritaville” “One Particular Harbour” , and “Last Mango in Paris” , to name a few.
...albums, such as "Come Monday,"
delete 'to name a few'
put commas inside quoatation marks
the albums in which they were originally released on are only available on CD in MCA’s CDCP series.
delete "on"
Loads of neat pictures and paintings graced the album jackets, lyrics and liner notes were contained on the sleeves and so on.
Fascinating pictures and paintings graced the album jackets; lyrics and liner notes were contained on the sleeves.
I had to search hard online to find out who plays on Buffett’s 73-85 albums,
replace "hard" with "diligently"
The thing I find most disrespectful is the removal of Jimmy's dedications, for example, Volcano is/was dedicated to his wife and daughter.
...dedications. For example, the album
Volcano was dedicated...
Yes, I understand that interest is low on this subject as most music fans come to the reasoning that all that matters is the music and don’t care one bit about the printed material, most likely the reason these CD issues have been available on the market for so long.
I do understand that some fans may consider the music more important than the printed material, possibly the reason these CD issues have been avaiable on the market for so long.
The main point here is, if nearly every other album on the face of the planet can have complete CD packages, why can’t the 12 albums mentioned above?
...if many other popular artists' albums can be reissued in their original form, why...
Again, I apologize if you don’t have a response for me. If that is true, please provide me with an e-mail address for someone who can maybe answer.
If you are unable to answer my particular questions, please provide me with the address of the correct individual.
HTH!