AN OFFER OF ROMANCE FOR THE LADIES OF BN

Mottola-Buffett · Post by **Mottola-Buffett** » March 14, 2008 1:32 am

This request goes out to ladies only... Sorry guys.

I'm looking for a couple of women interested in reading a 200 page manuscript for a novel I've written and providing feedback.

YOU DON'T HAVE TO BE A PROFESSIONAL EDITOR OR PROOFREADER OR ENGLISH TEACHER OR SUCH, JUST A REGULAR JOE... I MEAN JANE, THAT IS. The only prerequesite is that you enjoy light romantic suspenses. (And this one happens to be completely Buffettesque in theme.)

I'm rather anxious for feedback; therefore, a quick turn-around would be greatly appreciated. (Quick, meaning within the next month or two)

Once I find an interested person, I'll PM you with more details, OR you can PM me if you have questions or want more information.

You can't imagine how much I would appreciate some good honest BN feedback.

Thanks,
Lisa

P.S.: Women happen to be my target audience, but if you're a guy that loves a good "chic romance", then, by all means, feel free to reply.

SharkOnLand · Post by **SharkOnLand** » March 14, 2008 10:52 am

I expected different when I clicked on the title....

HULA GIRL^ · Post by **HULA GIRL^** » March 14, 2008 10:55 am

I'm in.

CapnK · Post by **CapnK** » March 14, 2008 11:31 am

Mottola-Buffett wrote: if you're a guy that loves a good "chic romance", then, by all means, feel free to reply.

not that there's anything wrong with that.

springparrot · Post by **springparrot** » March 14, 2008 11:32 am

HULA GIRL^ wrote:I'm in.

me too

Mottola-Buffett · Post by **Mottola-Buffett** » March 14, 2008 2:31 pm

Thanks so much to those of you that have already offered. I am certainly open to more offers if anyone else should be interested. I'll get in touch with each of you later today or some time over the weekend as I've got a crazy day ahead of me.
Thanks again! You can't imagine how much I appreciate this.

nutmeg · Post by **nutmeg** » March 14, 2008 2:38 pm

I'd love to read it!

Dally · Post by **Dally** » March 14, 2008 3:19 pm

I'd love to be able to read it!!!!

ParrotheadKalee · Post by **ParrotheadKalee** » March 14, 2008 5:22 pm

I'd love to be included in this! Thank you so much for extending the offer...

OttoCal · Post by **OttoCal** » March 14, 2008 6:03 pm

Sure, I'm in. Sounds like fun!

ragtopW · Post by **ragtopW** » March 15, 2008 10:04 pm

How many people get shot??

what kind of cars are in the High Speed chase??

maybe I'll let the Gals do this one..

CUparrot · Post by **CUparrot** » March 15, 2008 10:13 pm

I'll take a look at it, if you want more input. I love a good chick book.

Mottola-Buffett · Post by **Mottola-Buffett** » March 15, 2008 10:15 pm

ragtopW wrote:How many people get shot??

what kind of cars are in the High Speed chase??

maybe I'll let the Gals do this one..

That's EXACTLY what my husband said!

Mottola-Buffett · Post by **Mottola-Buffett** » March 15, 2008 10:16 pm

CUparrot wrote:I'll take a look at it, if you want more input. I love a good chick book.

I still don't have my act together. I'll let you know, though. Thanks for the offer.

PHAW Webmistress · Post by **PHAW Webmistress** » March 15, 2008 11:06 pm

I'd be happy to help out too

Mottola-Buffett · Post by **Mottola-Buffett** » March 17, 2008 11:46 pm

Thanks again to all of you ladies and men (yes, some men) that offered to read my story. Unfortunately, I can't get the manuscript out to all of you (I resorted to a name draw), BUT, once it's published, I'll make sure you're all aware, as I have a feeling the Buffettesque theme might interest those of you that like a romance.
Lisa

ragtopW · Post by **ragtopW** » March 17, 2008 11:58 pm

I (for one) Just want to commend you to starting and sticking to a project..
I am proud of you for that...

TropicalTroubador · Post by **TropicalTroubador** » March 18, 2008 1:46 pm

SharkOnLand wrote:I expected different when I clicked on the title....

So did I, actually.

Now if *I* had started a topic with that subject, the message would be more like, "I want to be your cabana boy!"

TropicalTroubador · Post by **TropicalTroubador** » March 18, 2008 1:47 pm

ragtopW wrote:I (for one) Just want to commend you to starting and sticking to a project..
I am proud of you for that...

Yes, absolutely. I once wrote half of a novel, and I've written enough songs so that what's left after some severe critical review fill three albums (third one coming soon!), and I know how much work it is to do all of that. Congratulations!

Mottola-Buffett · Post by **Mottola-Buffett** » March 18, 2008 2:09 pm

Thanks guys!

Actually, one of the most difficult parts of writing this book has been the lack of free time to actually do it. Hard to concentrate when you're constantly interrupted by an 8 yr old, 6 yr old and 3 yr old. Hopefully book #2 won't take me as long to write.

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